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Alone
Sept 30, 2003 19:06:15 GMT -5
Post by Lègôlás on Sept 30, 2003 19:06:15 GMT -5
Alone
Alone inside, searching for a friendly face I turn the other cheek, hoping for a warm embrace I feel like running until I fall off the edge of the earth And never returning to the endless hurt
Sometimes I wish that I were "them" Just until I'm rejected, once again I always search for someone who will love me for me Never being sad, lonely, always "bright and cheery"
Go ahead, then, keep walking away I never understand you the same way Can't you see I'm torn up inside? Yeah, keep walking, we'll coincide
I always turn the other cheek Hoping someone will be there for me
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Alone
Oct 4, 2003 15:21:32 GMT -5
Post by Arwen Undomiel on Oct 4, 2003 15:21:32 GMT -5
That is a really good poem. You really good at this.
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Alone
Oct 4, 2003 15:24:56 GMT -5
Post by Lègôlás on Oct 4, 2003 15:24:56 GMT -5
you're a good liar! no i'm just kidding. thank you though, i thought it was stupid, i could have done better, but that's how i feel. this poem describes me, bion (believe it or not). so thanks for sayin it's good!!
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Alone
Dec 20, 2003 3:36:06 GMT -5
Post by Rina on Dec 20, 2003 3:36:06 GMT -5
Wow, great poem (honestly!!) I loved it. I love to write poems too. BUt I'd never post them here. COmpared to yer guys, mine would look horrid!! lol
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Alone
Dec 22, 2003 15:58:08 GMT -5
Post by Lègôlás on Dec 22, 2003 15:58:08 GMT -5
yay!
i got praise!
Rina, you should post your poems, fanfics, stories, anything in here! No one cares if it sucks! We'd probably disagree anyway! I like seeing other people's writings and then...erm...helping them out! It's more fun to give friendly advice! lol
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Alone
Dec 23, 2003 5:17:39 GMT -5
Post by Rina on Dec 23, 2003 5:17:39 GMT -5
Lol maybe, I love doing fanfics though.
Am i allowed to post those here, if they are not Lotr related?
I haven't quite got aas far as Lotr....lol
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Alone
Jan 1, 2004 4:35:27 GMT -5
Post by Lègôlás on Jan 1, 2004 4:35:27 GMT -5
yeah, yer allowed to...
didn't we already go through this?
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Alone
Apr 12, 2004 13:59:47 GMT -5
Post by The Stinky Beach Whale on Apr 12, 2004 13:59:47 GMT -5
your poem is really good i'm rejected everywhere for being a skater/ goth it sucks
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Alone
Jan 29, 2005 21:58:22 GMT -5
Post by Lègôlás on Jan 29, 2005 21:58:22 GMT -5
wow, i wrote this poem so long ago!
i have a whole bunch more now that i actually like...
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