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Post by Arwen Undomiel on Sept 27, 2003 23:42:57 GMT -5
Hurt trapped in this skin not made for this body brisued and beaten all black and blue cuts and scraps infected cold and dark inside theres nothing to grasp I'm falling off the cliff of security into a valley of pain broken bones when I land miles dropping down hurt is all around theres no end it seem no light at the end of the tunnel life slipping through the cracks like sand in my fingers
life is a blur
life is a blur. spining around spining fast
I spin around faster than the day before traped in this blur
reaching a speed unbearable reaching towards the top.
life is a blur that doesn't stop No clear place to even rest.
I triped, I faltered I fell to the ground.
I wonder why this world is moving so fast, leaving me behind. moving all around I have no answers for the questions that lie inside me.
I only know that life is a blur spining around, spining fast.
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Post by Lègôlás on Sept 28, 2003 17:23:01 GMT -5
i like that! it's good. is that the same one on ur site or a different one?
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Post by Arwen Undomiel on Sept 29, 2003 20:02:10 GMT -5
well I changed the 2nd to the last part, I added a few lines that I forgot on the one I posted at my site. but anyways I have to get the rest of my poems off my comp. at home. I am at emily's. bye
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Post by Lègôlás on Sept 30, 2003 19:03:07 GMT -5
ok whatever. did anyone ever tell you you're weird?
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Post by Rina on Dec 20, 2003 3:34:02 GMT -5
::mouth drops open:: Why Legolas!! That is so mean!! lol jk.
Btw Arwen I loved yer poem!!
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Post by Lègôlás on Dec 22, 2003 16:05:22 GMT -5
Yay!
Praise for Arwen!
Rina--
Courtney (Arwen) and I are ALWAAAAAAYS like that! we have a love/hate relationship. i need to call her today...
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Post by Rina on Dec 23, 2003 5:19:44 GMT -5
I kow!!
I was just messing!
And yeah, she deserves praise for tht poem!!
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Post by Lègôlás on Jan 1, 2004 4:27:43 GMT -5
yay!
Courtney gets mucho praise!!
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Post by The Stinky Beach Whale on Apr 3, 2004 8:12:34 GMT -5
liking it... arwen good work ::aplauds with stinky tail::
ignore me i'm wierd,
yours stinkily, the stinky beach whale ;D
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Post by Lègôlás on Apr 8, 2004 12:18:41 GMT -5
a lot of the people on this site are...
so don't worry.
you're safe.
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